This week is PROMPTuesday #15: One Word Says It All
Deb's selected topic this week: Write about deception. Whatever that means to you. Can be fact or fiction.
Deb's PROMPTuesday rules:
* You must write your entry in 10 minutes. This encourages top-of-mind, primal thinking before the ego and judgmental brain kick in.
* Keep to 250 words or less.
* Please have fun. Don’t put pressure on yourself. Together, let’s rediscover the simple joy in the writing process.
* Post your submission in Deb's comments OR post in your blog and leave a link to your blog in Deb's comments.
So . . . heeeeeeere's my submission this week:

deception
the rings and the roses and the kiss
held the covenant of everlasting moments
like that
the revelations and the discoveries and the mysteries
held the certainty of uncertain times
like that
the joy and the pain and the triumphs
held the promise of intangible intimacy
like that
the dreams and the memories and the journey
held the rings and the roses and the kiss
like that
the picket fences and the bassinets and the road
held the truth of a life
like that


20 comments:
Stunning.
This is really good, Cherie. You should submit it to a print journal. Seriously.
Oops. Sorry for spelling your name wrong. That's what I get when I to write without irony: silly errors.
Whoa! Cheri, that is awesome! Really beautiful.
LOVE it. I've really missed your PROMPTuesday posts. Glad you're at it again.
OK look. Isn't it enough that you're beautiful, a genius, and nice? Do we *really* need to be throwing turbo talented into the mix? It's quite unfair.
(Good as usual, Cheri).
xoxox,
Deb
Wow...I'm just stunned. Amazingly beautiful...
Wow, you just wrote that????
you do poetry too?
i love it and love the graphic too.
This is friggin' brilliant and scary good for 10 minutes. Yeah, you!
Can you email me? I am trying to plan a gathering when Kalynne comes to LA on the 9th. She wants you there! :)
"Well done!", said in phony British accent!!
That is extraordinary. Very impressive, indeed.
beautiful!
Oh wow, I am blown away. Incredible image and prose.
Impressive!
i've been lurking you lately waiting for the camp blog this mom! post.
That's worth a read or 50. A life's worth of lies between the lines.
Really fantabulous - and sad and real.
- temple
That is just wonderful! You are so talented!
That's amazing! It really makes you think.
Absolutely beautiful!
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