Here's this week's prompt from Deb:
Today’s PROMPTuesday keeps it simple.
Read this poem (one of [San Diego Momma's] favorites):
Disillusionment of Ten O’Clock
by Wallace Stevens
The houses are haunted
By white night-gowns.
None are green,
Or purple with green rings,
Or green with yellow rings,
Or yellow with blue rings.
None of them are strange,
With socks of lace
And beaded ceintures.
People are not going
To dream of baboons and periwinkles.
Only, here and there, an old sailor,
Drunk and asleep in his boots,
Catches Tigers
In red weather.
Meditate on it for a minute. Then write whatever comes to mind.
Here are PROMPTuesday’s rules:
* You must write your entry in 10 minutes. This encourages top-of-mind, primal thinking before the ego and judgmental brain kicks in. Just set a timer, make your kid count to 600 slowly, whatever. It’s an honor system. And I trust you.
* Keep to 250 words or less.
* Please have fun. Don’t put pressure on yourself. Together, let’s rediscover the simple joy in the writing process.
* Post your submission in the comments OR post in your blog and leave a link to your blog in the comments.
Write y’all. Let those red tigers escape.
Here's my PROMPTuesday entry for this week's exercise:
His Sunglasses
She perused websites, went to lots, and took a test drive or ten. After a considerable period of time filled with comparisons and discernment, she made her choice. Into a brown paper bag from Trader Joe’s went colored markers, a spiral notebook filled with doodles, his sunglasses, a bottle of hand sanitizer, a plastic container of baby wipes, a half-filled bag of raw almonds, a cell phone charger, two packs of gum promising to whiten teeth, a tube of Revlon ColorStay Sheer Champagne lip gloss, and a Betty & Veronica comic book. She opened the door and the scent from the new leather seats filled her nostrils. One by one, she removed the contents from the brown paper bag. The markers and notebook and comic book went into the built-in pockets behind the front seats, easily accessible to the hands of little passengers. The hand sanitizer, gum, and lip gloss were nestled in the compartment below the center console. The container of baby wipes rested on the front passenger-side floor mat, waiting to clean all manner of mess. The cell phone charger was plugged into the cigarette lighter that would never be used but to charge a cell phone or an iPod. The bag of raw almonds was stowed in the glove box, ready to soothe hunger pangs in a pinch. His sunglasses used to have a special compartment between the sun visors, in the old car. The new car had no such compartment. Where would she put them now?


19 comments:
can i ride in the back with laura and the comics and markers?
You are such a Betty-she was my favorite. Wallace Stevens is the man.
This sounds like the inside of my purse, only not as nicely organized.
Once again...you rock these prompts! Love this one.
Heidi
You're flippin' amazing at these prompts. Crazy talented, you are.
You can come rock on my porch anytime! I'll even break out the Mint Milanos and the Dr. Pepper...that's about as crazy as we get in NE.:-)
That is exactly the sort of stuff I have in my car.
The sunglasses are intriguing though.
I bet no one would lose their Colorado driver's license between the seats in that car!
Holy cow! Seriously, you are too good!
Such attention to detail! It gets me every time. And what makes your stuff so good. (Aside from the gorgina writing.)
Deb
sandiegomomma.com
Wow, impressive :)
sick burn, jenn.
Oh, I used to love the Archie comics!!
This sounded like a fun ride. Can I come, too?
Well done! I love Betty:)
It is so fun how one poem can make people think of different things! It is fun to remember the simple things that drive you a little crazy. :)
LOL! Loved it!
I've loved me many an Archie comic in my time.
You right as if every story is from your own life. Very good.
I totally love this, and I'm going to try it this week! Thanks for sharing it.
I love your response. Way cool writing!
So...is someone making plans for major road trip?? or are you just really wanting to go on one?? you know...sometimes our true feeling come out in our writing...just wondering....
This was great!!!
**and by the way....where are you?? did I miss a post where you said you were taking a break?? I hope all is well with you and yours!! just miss ya, that's all!!
I had that ACTUAL issue, baby. Sigh. There was nothing like a shiny, new Betty & Veronica a trip to the lake.
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